2Writing Task 1: Writing an Email
Read the following information.
Your niece has just graduated from high school with remarkable grades. She was the brightest student in her class. However, she wants to work immediately and does not consider going to college.
Write an email to your niece in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:
– Explain how you feel about her high school grades.
– Explain why going to college is necessary.
– Explain why working instead of perusing her college education is a mistake.
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Task 1 Sample Answer
Hearing about your high school graduation made me very proud of you. I felt an unimaginable delight going over your excellent grades the other day. Be that as it may, accepting a job position at this early stage is a premature unwise decision.
The importance of higher education in our modern age in both academic and work level is of paramount significance. Your intellectual dimensions will grow immensely in college. Besides, exploring your inner qualifications and capacities would only be possible in a scholarly atmosphere. Not to mention the new relations and friendships that will positively affect your professional life.
Starting a job so soon would have numerous negative outcomes. To start with, do not expect a respectable high income that would secure your financial life. A higher pay rate means a higher degree which you would be lacking. Moreover, the pain and regret you will experience seeing your friend’s successful careers who continued their studies would simply devastate you.
Though I am not your father, but it is still my responsibility to warn you when I feel you are in the wrong track.
Task 2 is on the next page